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ii.
Yesterday, the fog rose
and it beaded condensation on my steering wheel. I
shifted numbed fingers, peered. A morning breaking,
keeping me. Dawn settles on my bones these days;
the feel is like grit beneath my eyes. Sleepless,
sleepwalk. My chest is heavy. I lend myself to grace,
I know these roads.
A stag was standing in my marsh.
I lingered to watch him, we watched each other,
frost circles curling from nostrils, my thready pulse perhaps too loud.
I counted, six points. My hands were trembling
and he held himself;
he held his ground, held those stiff and sleek-slick muscles to quiver. Waiting, birdsong.
I could keep him from his water.
He could keep me from my day.
I broke and turned to drive.
i.
Yesterday, the night fell
in soft grayed curtains, a downy sort of mist over these hills. I
shifted numbed fingers over the keys. The screen was flickering like the
candle in the corner, something
dripping from the wick. A smoky drag dug in my chest, husky fatigue.
I'd found a picture of you. It wavered on my screen like an unfinished word:
When you had golden hair.
When you could smile without whiskey,
Veins without tracks. At least the hurt in you was fresh
and clear, at least a focused gaze, at least you hadn't left it, and it stung;
Aching, our nights alone, and tea gone cold and bitter on my teeth.
You could keep me from my breathing.
I could hold you in your grave.
I broke and turned away.
Yesterday, the fog rose
and it beaded condensation on my steering wheel. I
shifted numbed fingers, peered. A morning breaking,
keeping me. Dawn settles on my bones these days;
the feel is like grit beneath my eyes. Sleepless,
sleepwalk. My chest is heavy. I lend myself to grace,
I know these roads.
A stag was standing in my marsh.
I lingered to watch him, we watched each other,
frost circles curling from nostrils, my thready pulse perhaps too loud.
I counted, six points. My hands were trembling
and he held himself;
he held his ground, held those stiff and sleek-slick muscles to quiver. Waiting, birdsong.
I could keep him from his water.
He could keep me from my day.
I broke and turned to drive.
i.
Yesterday, the night fell
in soft grayed curtains, a downy sort of mist over these hills. I
shifted numbed fingers over the keys. The screen was flickering like the
candle in the corner, something
dripping from the wick. A smoky drag dug in my chest, husky fatigue.
I'd found a picture of you. It wavered on my screen like an unfinished word:
When you had golden hair.
When you could smile without whiskey,
Veins without tracks. At least the hurt in you was fresh
and clear, at least a focused gaze, at least you hadn't left it, and it stung;
Aching, our nights alone, and tea gone cold and bitter on my teeth.
You could keep me from my breathing.
I could hold you in your grave.
I broke and turned away.
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love her like St. Patrick.
dA, you suck so hard for not allowing accent marks in titles, haha.
dA, you suck so hard for not allowing accent marks in titles, haha.
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I
LOVE
THIS
I'm sorry for reacting so enthusiastic when this is obviously a more somber poem, but this is amazing! The imagery is so beautiful <3 Stunning. Well done.
LOVE
THIS
I'm sorry for reacting so enthusiastic when this is obviously a more somber poem, but this is amazing! The imagery is so beautiful <3 Stunning. Well done.